Thursday, February 10, 2011

Peer Edit Redux

1. Washington state provided a subsidy of more than $2,000 for in-state students.

2. “The $13.5 million is the tip of a larger iceberg,” Jerry McCollum, the coordinator of arts and culture, said.

3. “The system is broken right now, we can’t live in a world with 14 percent tuition increases,” Floyd said.

4. The co-presidents announced a club for people who are interested in hiking.

5. “There are still new things to say with art music," Williams said. "It’s hard to stop and listen, but when you do it can be an extremely pleasant surprise.”

6. In September 2010, the wine-tasting endorsement will be available to stores, said Jane Westman, the culinary coordinator for Metropolitan Market.

7. He died from a heart attack in September 1996.

8. The club has its own audio engineer.

9. When the cannon exploded, the noise added to the excitement of the game.


Shorten the following sentences.

1. Sleep becomes less of a priority for many students.

2. A new workout routine is sweeping the country.

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